Ok, but some major problems...
I will admit i haven't watched episode 1 and 2 but just watching this I found some major problems you should work on:
1) Get rid of the random german. It doesn't make any freaking sense.
2) Triple check for spelling and grammar errors. There were quite a few. If you have to copy paste your text into microsoft word, do it.
3) Some of the characters didn't makelogical decisions. Deciding to tell a very long story when you are rushing to save your friend wouldn't be something I'd do. Also walking off to get resources because you are bored with your friend being knocked out on the beach isn't a very good idea either.
Overall it was ok, but the above things need to be fixed.
lol, yeah, i geuss i wouldnt walk off if im running low on foodon a deserted planet, when i havent eaten for days.
I think some people...
...are being a little too harsh on this cartoon. You have to remember this was created as a school project and as such I feel you should vote on it according to how well it covered the author's goal. While it could have been more funny in some ways you can't go all out in school. However, I think it could have been better if you would have shown some of the facts slower, it was pretty much impossible to see them all. Good job overall.
It was ok...
Could have been a lot better if the ghost looked more realistic and or was more fluently animated. Also I would have made the ghost actually bleed after "you" stabbed him for extra humor/violence effect. Also it was a bit short and didn't really have a conclusion (the ghost didn't die?). I'm sure other people have already said this but I didn't bother reading the other reviews, your replay button doesn't work. Ok overall.
People are totally wrong
I dig the fact that it's hard to control the ghosts. If it wasn't that way there'd be no point to the game. SUPER FUN man. I love it. Much better than your anti td game.
One thing I'd definitly change is that you should automatically lose when you're down to one ghost.
Best Enemies Ever
Communist Zeppelins + Evil Faeries = Awesome. However the game itself was not that good. Since I like non pointless reviews I'll tell you that you should make the enemies flash red or crack or something when you hit them. Also some kind of evident (i couldn't tell any) difference between the cursors (such as doing more damage or whatnot) would help make this game more unique. The cursor powerups should also be less frequent (if I recall correctly a new one spawns every time you pick one up). Great graphics though and nice concept that could have gone way farther. Sounds were lacking in general; I didn't really mind the music as much as everyone else but the sound effects weren't good, you should have had an explosion for the zeppelins or something.
Thanks for the long review :D
I'll definately take it into account if I may another one.
Awesome Graphics, Terrible Gameplay
There's way more to game making then graphics and 3d programming. A huge problem with this game was the lack of instructions. I started off walking in the opposite direction of the big green markers so I had no idea to go towards them. After spending about 5 minutes trying to catch birds I turned around and realized the markers were there. Second, this game was incredibly boring. Running around repetitive scenery (no matter how good it looks for flash) is just no fun. The game was incredibly easy and the plot was quite frankly terrible. Apparently I destroyed the world so now I have to feed a big red head to revive it by riding around on a horse and catching bugs with a lasso. Then, after flying on a giant bug and the big red head, who I'm told is named Xexis, I am now magically teleported back to my horse to run up to a big blue head with a little body. Here I am magically turned into a statue which somehow revives the world. Do you have any idea how ridiculous that all sounds? Anyway good graphics. Bad story, gameplay, and game design.
That brough a smile to my face and made me laugh:) i mean, sure, you're right...running around a desert land feeding dissembodied heads and roping flying centipedes is ridiculous compared to real life, and its funny to get a good roasting from a player. Thanks for the graphics compliments and ill work on the story part in the future
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