Ok, but some major problems...
I will admit i haven't watched episode 1 and 2 but just watching this I found some major problems you should work on:
1) Get rid of the random german. It doesn't make any freaking sense.
2) Triple check for spelling and grammar errors. There were quite a few. If you have to copy paste your text into microsoft word, do it.
3) Some of the characters didn't makelogical decisions. Deciding to tell a very long story when you are rushing to save your friend wouldn't be something I'd do. Also walking off to get resources because you are bored with your friend being knocked out on the beach isn't a very good idea either.
Overall it was ok, but the above things need to be fixed.
lol, yeah, i geuss i wouldnt walk off if im running low on foodon a deserted planet, when i havent eaten for days.
I think some people...
...are being a little too harsh on this cartoon. You have to remember this was created as a school project and as such I feel you should vote on it according to how well it covered the author's goal. While it could have been more funny in some ways you can't go all out in school. However, I think it could have been better if you would have shown some of the facts slower, it was pretty much impossible to see them all. Good job overall.
It was ok...
Could have been a lot better if the ghost looked more realistic and or was more fluently animated. Also I would have made the ghost actually bleed after "you" stabbed him for extra humor/violence effect. Also it was a bit short and didn't really have a conclusion (the ghost didn't die?). I'm sure other people have already said this but I didn't bother reading the other reviews, your replay button doesn't work. Ok overall.
That was an interesting flash. However it was too short to be enjoyable. Would have been really cool if the "doodles" told a storyline as they went.
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